MR: Max: Fair is Fair (Take Two)

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Comment by Amy Schattel on December 23, 2012 at 2:42pm

Haha, I really enjoyed this video.  Two brief comments I would make are: Slow down!  There is a fine line between getting one's point across and between trying to get the lines out as fast as possible, and I feel that when you had lines that were longer than a sentence you tended to speed up your line delivery as you went along.  A little practice and conscious effort will absolutely get rid of that slight problem.  My other comment would be, try not to look to the side every time Dean is talking. I understand the side looks are meant to show the audience what Max is really thinking and whatnot, but too many of those side glances just becomes repetitive and something Dean would catch if he was a trained FBI agent, which he is.  Good take on this scene. (: 

Comment by Veronica on October 9, 2012 at 5:28pm

Good at being sarcastic and lying love ur refusing to talk

Comment by Yiselis on October 6, 2012 at 11:44am

This was great! The sarcasm was golden! I'd only say to slow down a bit when its your turn to speak, and yeah. thats it.

Comment by Abigail on September 12, 2012 at 6:55pm

AHHH thank you!!! :D

Comment by Lauren on September 11, 2012 at 9:44am

OMYGOD THIS IS SO GOOD. Dude. I love this. So much.

Comment by Abigail on September 10, 2012 at 8:39pm

ablahehfsueh thank you so much!! :)

Comment by Claire on September 10, 2012 at 6:37pm

omg ur an awsome max! you look, sound, and act like her, its awsome, keep up the good work!

Comment by Abigail on September 8, 2012 at 10:30pm

Thank you very much for the great advice! :)

Max/June Comment by Emily K on September 8, 2012 at 6:45pm

Woooo congrats on getting this featured! I see why. :)
Okay, so this was really great. I loved the attitude, although you could have slowed down a little bit at some parts because you know, Dean is stupid so Max would talk to him like that. And also yes, you could use a little bit more annoyance like everyone said. One more thing I noticed is that when Dean is giving you te spiel about how fair is fair, you were looking at the side smirking, and that felt really really scripted and unnatural.
But anyways, I reaaaally really liked this. Amazing job!

Comment by Abigail on April 9, 2012 at 4:29pm

WOW thank you soooo much :D that makes my day!! :)

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